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This is an online version of Bertram Bruce's Technology department published in the October 2000 issue of the International Reading Association's Journal of Adolescent & Adult Literacy. This department is reprinted regularly in Reading Online, and ROL readers are invited to browse the full listing of available columns. |
Opportunities for Teenagers to Share Their Writing Online
Editor's Message
As inexpensive personal computers began entering schools in the early 1980s, the use of word processors for learning to write soon became one of the most widely used applications. The new tool offered many advantages over traditional pencil and paper.
The advent of the Web a decade later extended these advantages. It was now possible to share writing with much wider audiences and to link it with the writing of others. New tools for graphic design and interactivity further enhanced what students could do.
Today, most teachers know that the combination of word processing with the Web holds a great potential for student writers. Many are discovering ways to overcome the initial barriers of finding equipment and beginning to integrate these new tools into writing across the curriculum. But as with any technology, there are unanticipated consequences of their use. Because new technologies spread so rapidly, issues of access, privacy, plagiarism, commercialism, cost, and community arise in new guises and usually before most of us are ready.
In this month's column, Marcella Kehus shares her experiences with helping students write for audiences not only beyond the teacher, but beyond the classroom, the school, and the geographical community. She works with TeenLit.com (see Literacy Web Page of the Month), one of the best sites for teen writers, and her study of its use is an all-too-rare example of what we must do if we are to understand more about the meaning of new technologies for developing literacy.
-- Bertram C. Bruce
Issue
Working with teen writers online: Policies, procedures, and possibilities
I became interested in the issues of policies, procedures, and possibilities of online communities through my experiences as one of the creators and hosts of TeenLit.com. The roots of TeenLit.com stem from two colliding ideas I had a few years back. First, I have always believed that publication is the key motivator and application for teaching students to write, but I was continually frustrated by the scarcity of real publishing opportunities for my teenage students. Second, as I was doing some Web publishing outside of my teaching responsibilities, I was struck by the relative ease, immediacy, and low cost of publishing on the World Wide Web and even more impressed with the potential and growing audience for reading work published there. And so, toward the end of 1999, with this idea, a few hundred dollars, and a teacher friend of mine as partner, TeenLit.com was born on the World Wide Web. Since its inception, TeenLit.com has been concerned with two primary goals: (a) providing authentic purpose and audience for teens' writing and (b) providing a place for a community of such adolescent writers to form and thrive.
For example, in an initial study of TeenLit.com (Kehus, 1999), I provided an online bulletin board for visitors to post messages about the published writing or even drafts of their own. As you can see from the Figure, activity on the site has been high and increasing fairly steadily between its start in the first week of January 1999, with 89 visits, to the last week of July 1999, with 754 visits.

On average today, we have approximately 1,500 visitors a week to the site (based on weekly average of unique visits from 4/16/00-5/13/00). Postings to the Web are detailed in Tables 1 and 2. Table 1 summarizes the formal genres of writing published on the site, while Table 2 shows the distribution of postings to the discussion board.
Table 1
Purpose of Published Writing on TeenLit.com
| Category | Percentage of Published Writing (n = 103) |
|---|---|
| Teen writers -- poetry | 82 |
| Teen writers -- short story | 10 |
| Teen writers -- essay | 6 |
| Teen writers -- book reviews | 1 |
| Teen cool links | < 1 |
| Teacher resources | < 1 |
| Teacher links | < 1 |
| Not listed -- add a new category | < 1 |
Table 2
Purpose of Teen Writers' Discussion Bulletin Board Postings
| Category | Percentage of Total Postings (n = 99) |
|---|---|
| Feedback to writing published on TeenLit.com | 30 |
| Other -- miscellaneous | 14 |
| Not selected | 14 |
| Random thoughts | 13 |
| Draft -- want feedback | 9 |
| Ideas | 7 |
| Book talk | 5 |
| Teacher comments | 4.5 |
| Publishing opportunities | 2.5 |
| Contests | 0 |
| TeenLit.com Web site | 0 |
It's clear that we've accomplished our initial goal with TeenLit.com. Our visitors are active in posting original writings, comments to other members, and so forth that serve a broad audience of adolescent writers and readers. However, whether or not we can say we have an actual community of writers is open to doubt. I believe the lack of a feeling of community can be traced to four key reasons:
Building on these lessons, I am currently studying a subset of TeenLit authors who have elected to join a smaller, private online community known as eWeb. Because this group will be a private and identifiable group of voluntary involved authors from TeenLit, empowered by a number of Web-based technologies, I continue to examine the development and possibilities of such an online community.
From my first study, as well as my current work, I have learned a great deal. In this column, I share some of the lessons I've learned about publishing on the Web, working with adolescents online, and attempting to establish community. For, indeed, the World Wide Web is murky water, especially when dealing with minors, and we have had to be continually responsive in our policy making and action within this Web site. The Web is constantly changing and broaching new frontiers, and so some of this information may be quickly outdated. Because I believe that students' work on the Web is both powerful and problematic, I hope to guide you through some of our lessons. I'll begin with the broadest forms of public policy in the United States regarding content rating, children's online privacy, and copyright.
Policies from the outside
Content rating. Before censorship advocates push for U.S. government regulation, the Web publishing community has voluntarily created and used its own content-rating system. This system provides for hidden code in the header of pages that browsers read to determine the appropriateness of a site given the user's (or parent's) guidelines. Web site administrators are responsible for registering their site with either one or both of the two emerging regulatory sites, RSACi (www.icra.org/) or SafeSurf (www.safesurf.com/), and for placing the appropriate codes on their Web pages. Using a standard known as PICS, both of these sites currently have volunteers rate their sites' content on violence, nudity, sex, and profane language. SafeSurf has added categories for intolerance, homosexual/heterosexual themes, gambling, and glorifying drug use. With these ratings in place, parents, schools, and other concerned individuals can set Web browsers up to view content that meets their specific standards, in alliance with PICS. This can be done with independent software or directly from within the most recent editions of Internet Explorer and Netscape Navigator.
Children's Online Privacy Protection Act (COPPA, at www.ftc.gov/reports/privacy3, or www.idg.net). Issues of privacy on the Internet are hot topics today, and nowhere are they more alarming than when soliciting information from minors. Thus, the U.S. government, specifically the Federal Trade Commission, has enacted COPPA. This Act is being implemented with a sliding scale that will gradually become more strict over the next 2 years as technology and Web masters work to catch up with its demands. In final form, the latest version of this Act requires written verifiable parental consent before anyone on the Internet can get information from a child under the age of 13 in such situations as joining an e-mail list, submitting a form, or posting to a bulletin board. Thus, our site requires participants to be 13 years of age or older, and we attempt to verify this by asking this question of age before allowing any submission, posting, or addition to the mailing list. (To generate your own privacy statement: http://privacy.linkexchange.com/.)
Copyright (lcWeb.loc.gov/copyright/circs/circ1.html). As with any text, as soon as someone puts his or her work in writing, that text is copyrighted to the author. However, plagiarism on the Internet is as easy as copying and pasting, so copyright(s) of the author(s) need to be made clear and foreboding. Although one can still register a copyright for further proof and protection, regulations now allow the use of the © symbol along with the year of first publication and the author's first and last name without formal registration. On TeenLit.com, our privacy policy clearly explains that authors retain all copyright (allowing us to publish online once) and may revoke this privilege from us and have their writing removed from the site at any time. On a few occasions, outsiders have wanted to use our students' writing for various purposes, such as publication in an anthology, use in a class, and even use on statewide testing. When these persons contact our site, we simply work as the intermediary, passing their requests on to authors, yet maintaining authors' privacy by not sharing their e-mail addresses, full names, or other contact information. Ultimately, the authors, as holders of copyright of their own writing, make the decision and follow through on such requests. (See www.teenlit.com/policy.htm.) Procedures from the inside Though the above topics are broad and affect everyone publishing on the World Wide Web, I have found other principles equally important in maintaining an ethically responsible site for adolescents that strives for a sense of community. These principles are summarized below.
Monitor live bulletin boards or other interactive forums. Such space leaves opportunities for flaming, spamming, privacy breaches, stalking, and more if not monitored and edited for violations daily. Protect privacy of all members. I suggest students never give out their last names, e-mail or Web page addresses, or other personal information. In fact, published writers are known only by their first name, grade, location, and the About the Author text they provide on our site. Link responsibly. Though it is said that you can get anywhere on the Web within six clicks, visit and be selective about the sites you provide links to in terms of appropriateness. Provide opt-out options. If you allow members to publish and join, you should also allow them to unpublish and unjoin. Be up front. Reveal any affiliates (companies you link to for profit), as well as such things as your use of cookies, IP addresses, and mailing lists. Other Views [Virtual communities are] social aggregations that emerge from the Net when enough people carry on those public discussions long enough, with sufficient human feeling, to form webs of personal relationships in cyberspace. (Rheingold, 1993, p. 5) The Net seems to provide a vehicle to explore the self and for children to establish themselves as independent, self-governing individuals. (Tapscott, 1998, p. 56) There is something about writing for the unseen audience out there at the other end of the line that inspires students not only to write more but to produce better writing. I also believe connecting kids with other kids around the country through an electronic network helps break down cultural, ethnic, and economic barriers. (Hunt, 1996, p. 231) How You Can Participate While teachers are certainly encouraged to send their students to TeenLit.com, we do not accept whole-class submissions. We do, however, allow up to one submission per author per genre per month, so send your very best writers. I also encourage teachers to promote the online publishing of their students' work -- given the above cautions, of course. Toward that end, I offer the following considerations. (a) Publishing criteria: Establish and make visible on the site a clear set of criteria against which all submissions will be judged. Make sure the criteria cover a variety of age groups and genres and that they include the privacy and rating issues discussed previously. (b) Have a submissions editor: Although some of our 8th-grade writers are as competent and mature as some of our 12th-grade writers, you should make allowances for age and ability differences. Given the global possibilities of the World Wide Web, consider that some of your submissions may come from countries where English is a second language. (c) Consider your audience: Keep the site interesting for your readers by varying the authors (by age) and the genres that you post. Also consider making a policy against class or group submissions. This will prevent your site from becoming heavy in one type of writing, such as 9th-grade personal essays, and will stop your inbox being flooded. (d) Revision: In my experience, the more personal and detailed the feedback I give a writer, the more likely that writer is to revise and even resubmit. To aid in this time-consuming process, I have recruited some of our teen participants to give advice and feedback to struggling writers. Remember to keep copies of all submissions, so that you will have them to compare against revisions. Literacy Web Page of the Month TeenLit.com is a private not-for-profit Web site currently funded and administered by two secondary teachers in southeastern Michigan. The purpose of TeenLit.com is to promote teen literacy by providing a forum for teen writers to publish and discuss their writing. TeenLit.com is also a research site for these teachers to investigate the efficacy of the World Wide Web in facilitating teen literacy in the above-mentioned ways by examining the interchanges that occur through this venue. Places that publish secondary student writing online The Amateur Poetry Journal. Online publishing of poetry along with articles, bulletin boards, and chat rooms for poets. Ayn Rand Institute essay contest. Annual contest for students in Grade 9-college; be sure to request the Teacher's Contest Kit. The Diary Project. This site encourages teens to write about their day-to-day experiences growing up. Diary entries are posted by the most recent data as well as sorted by topic, and all are submitted online by teens. Eve Magazine. Eve aims to provide a sanctuary of depth and intelligence for girls that other magazines don't seem to offer. It also accepts submissions for sections such as PowerChick, Rant Wall, Junk Drawer, Boy's Eye View, and Poetry Hive. The Inditer. The Inditer, though not specifically for teens, works to present a web presence for new writers and artists by publishing tons of writing along with introductory pages for all authors. InformNation. A site created and maintained by and for teenagers to express themselves in writing; the submission guidelines are refreshing. Link magazine. Aimed at the college audience, this online and print magazine offers a great variety of genres for submissions, and it's possible to be published and paid. New Poets (http://www.newpoets.net/). Another non-age-specific site for and about poetry and poets, which also boasts a bulletin board workshop. [Link disabled; site appears to have been taken down.] Poesie.com. Along with claiming a great deal of interactivity, this site lets the writer publish after merely registering, and, possibly, even get feedback. A commendable model, though it lacks any editorial controls or monitoring. Potato Hill Poetry. This site wishes to ignite a passion for poetry in schools across the country, and we find its contest most promising. READ magazine. Fine publishing of teen writing online, though submissions are only accepted via snail mail. TeenVoice. The expressions gallery expands the genres of online publishing by posting works of poetry, art, and humor by teenagers. Teen Ink. With a strong history of print publishing of teen writing, Teen Ink has made a good transition to the Web. Use Your Voice. Invited contributions here include categories such as monologues, poetry, quotes, and life. This site claims to be the only one dedicated to, run by, read by, and completely written by teens. Word Forge This site adds a twist by focusing on online writing collaborations. Writers Ezine. This family-focused sight specifies the need for submissions of short stories, children's short stories, poetry, recipes, articles regarding literacy, writing, writing for children, and the like. Glossary Affiliate (or reseller or VAR, Value Added Reseller): An affiliate links to another site for profit. For example, TeenLit.com links to Amazon.com with a special code tracking visitors from our site to theirs, and we make roughly 5% of the sales as a sort of commission on any purchases they make there. AUP (Acceptable Use Policy): The policy of a company, school district, or owners of computer networks that explicitly states what is and is not acceptable, including, for instance, how and when computers might be used for personal use, what sort of sites can and can not be viewed, what sorts of e-mail are allowed, and what specifically may be posted on their Web site. Cookie: A small file placed on the user's computer by a Web site that allows it to track and remember visitors. Cookies must be enabled and can be disabled on your browser. They are relatively harmless in that they can't damage or even access your system and don't contain high-stakes information (like credit card numbers), but they are a way of tracking you and thus infringing on your privacy. Flaming: Any derogatory message sent online, either posted to a message board or e-mailed. A particularly harsh flame might include a deluge of such messages. IP address: Every time you log on to the Internet, your Internet Service Provider (ISP) assigns you a unique IP address number that allows your computer to communicate with others (usually servers) to browse the Web and exchange e-mail. Your IP address can make you vulnerable to hackers as this is their way into an unprotected computer, but those most vulnerable are computers that are continually linked to the Internet with the same IP address, such as ones using cable modems or dedicated servers. Opt-out: Most reputable companies using e-mail lists usually give directions somewhere in their e-mail or on their site to allow you to remove yourself from such lists. This is known as the opt-out or option to get out. PICS: Platform for Internet Content Selection, developed as a common symbol system of rating content, specifically to allow control over what sorts of Web content a browser is allowed to view, mostly by parents controlling their children's Web viewing. WYSIWYG (pronounced wizzywig): What You See Is What You Get is the slang-term title for software, in this case Web-page creation software, that is very user friendly and straightforward. References Christian, S. (1997). Exchanging lives: Middle school writers online. Urbana, IL: National Council of Teachers of English. Howard, T., & Benson, C. (Eds.). (1999). Electronic networks: Crossing boundaries/creating communities. Portsmouth, NH: Boynton/Cook. Hunt, V. (1996). The Raptor Project. In C. Edgar & S. Wood (Eds.), The nearness of you: Students and teachers writing on-line (pp. 231-240). New York: Teachers and Writers Collaborative. Jones, S. (Ed.). (1999). Doing Internet research: Critical issues and methods for examining the Net. Thousand Oaks, CA: Sage. Kehus, M. (1999, December). An online discourse community of adolescent writers. Paper presented at the annual meeting of the National Reading Conference, Orlando, FL. Rheingold, H. (1993). The virtual community: Homesteading on the electronic frontier. Reading, MA: Addison-Wesley. Tapscott, D. (1998). Growing up digital: The rise of the net generation. New York: McGraw-Hill. About the Author Kehus is a secondary English teacher and doctoral candidate in reading and language arts at Oakland University in Rochester, Michigan, USA. E-mail: webmaster@teenlit.com. Mail: Marcella J. Kehus, 252 Linhart, Novi, MI 48377, USA. For an index of JAAL Technology columns available at this site, click here. To print this column, point and click anywhere on the main text; then use your browser's print command. Citation: Kehus, M.J. (2000, October). Opportunities for teenagers to share their writing online. Journal of Adolescent & Adult Literacy, 44(2). Available: http://www.readingonline.org/electronic/elec_index.asp?HREF=/electronic/jaal/10-00_Column/index.html Reading Online, www.readingonline.org
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Published October 2000 in the Journal of Adolescent & Adult Literacy
Posted simultaneously in Reading Online
© 2000 International Reading Association, Inc. ISSN 1096-1232